Tag: 2022 year 4 writing

Will He Save Her?

WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader’s mind)

Once upon a time  gwen was walking on the  street  with  her  mum and then

 She saw spider- man and then she said is that spider man she said to her mom said yes and gwen said who is going after him said gwen look mum it is light-man what is light-man doing said gwen i   don’t  no said mum ok then let follow them ok said mum  and then   they  followed    and they   were fighting and spiderman won after that  spider-man  saw  another   villain   and   it   was    rhino   and spider-man  saw rhino bumping cages with  money  and then  gwen  shouted go spider-man   and then spider-man looked at gwen and spider-man got bump from a   wall  dr  strange and iron man came out of the  portal  to  help  spider-man .